Thursday, September 22, 2005

EVOLUTION

This was written by me when i was in my 8th grade. It was one those moments when you just feeli like jottig down everything that you're thinking, onto a paper.

The land is empty,there is no sea
No flowers, no animals, happiness I do not know.
Living things,small to big
On its own, the soil gets tilled.
Hot air rises, and a session of eruptions in phase
Four legged trotting, Evolution is taking place.
Eruptios continue, Sun is their leader
Some become stronger, some become weaker.
Hard rain starts to pour,
Peeping through the clouds, seeping through the core.
Crescent spreads its wings in the darkness
and lights up the sky
Double legged winged creatures,
learn and teach how to fly.
Evolution takes the next step,
Seas and oceans start to fill
Long stretches of water until the horizon.
Rain makes the earth a moist zone.
Now the land produces on its own.
In the end come rational creatures
Enjoying gifts of the millenium
Eating more then they can consume
Kicking their own backs
Making tons of work to rubber
Bursting the nature's lovely bubble
Nevertheless the evolution continues
And so the perilious fumes
And finally the day comes
When these "humans" take over
and give rise to a term
simply coined "Armageddon" forever
Boom Blast goes the Mother
and evolution becomes from good to evil.
In the end out of no where,
There comes a second God called the DEVIL!

Rishabh

Copyright ©2005 Rishabh Kaul

8 comments:

Rishabh Kaul said...

oh u agian. i neva knew that blogs had bots too. eeewwww

Mia said...

haha

Mia said...

(talking to bots.... tsk tsk)

Rishabh Kaul said...

yawn, pj.
but yeah the jokez on me!

Rishabh Kaul said...

yeah right.

DuruBaba said...

schote.. laga reh... u doing good

Winged Fantasy said...

Wow! For a 8th class kid... You were very good. The song of evolution... Nice. Vaguely reminds me of the chapter of genesis from our Bible classes...

Nice blog and lovely poems. :-)

Oh and thanks for dropping by my blog. Hope to see you again. :-)

Cheers! Meenakshi

Nisha said...

hi thanks for the comment.. u never commented on anything else on my blog? hey come back again... and yeah u have a very good blog out there! lovely poems!